Fiction by Geoffrey
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COURBET AND THE RED VIRGIN (APRIL 1871)
By Geoffrey Fox
The Copperfield Review, Summer 2001 (A short story
in the form of a screenplay.)
Author's note: For many years I've wanted those hectic, desperate
and exuberant two and a half months of the Paris Commune, from
March 18, 1871 (when the French government fled Paris to Versailles)
to May 28 (when the last barricades fell). Karl Marx's analysis
of the revolutionary self-government by workers and bourgeois
in The Civil War in France became the theoretical
guide to practical revolution, from Lenin (State and Revolution)
to Chile's Unidad Popular (1970-1973).
This is a study, une étude, for a more ambitious
work. I wrote it as an exercise in a screenwriting class, which
explains its form. It was published as a story in the on-line
historical fiction journal, The Copperfield Review, Summer
2001.
Anarchist revolutionary Louise Michel (1830-1905), nicknamed
"la Vièrge Rouge," survived the Commune and
the tropical prison colony of Cayenne, and died in France.
Painter and elected Commune member Gustave Courbet (1819-1877)
died in exile in Switzerland.
I don't know whether they ever really met in that hectic,
revolutionary spring. If they had, it might have gone something
like the scene below.
Courbet, Gustave
The Painter's Studio; A Real Allegory
1855
Oil on canvas (thumbnail;
for larger image of this and other works by Courbet, see Mark
Harden's "Artchives")
11' 10 1/4" x 19' 7 1/2" (361 x 598 cm)
Musee d'Orsay, Paris
INTERIOR: COURBET'S ATELIER - DAY
A large room with an open window with a view of tile roofs of
Paris and the towers of the church on the Montmartre hill in
the distance. Inside, HENRIETTE, a plump, pretty, model in her
early twenties, stands on a platform in the familiar pose of
"Marianne Leading the People to Victory," her head
turned back toward the imaginary masses and her arm extended
toward the future; her dingy white chemise is pulled up on one
side to reveal a rouged knee, and pulled down on the other to
reveal a rouged breast. A bright red Phrygian cap perches atop
her mass of curls.
Three NATIONAL GUARDS, in uniform, sit on boxes or stools,
sketching her. OSMANE, thirtyish, is much the oldest; the other
two are only 16 or 17. Rifles, a mess-kit, easels, a drop-cloth
and various unfinished canvases are carelessly scattered on the
floor and against the walls.
GUSTAVE COURBET, 51, a big man with a big full beard, wearing
a smock with red wine-stains and a floppy beret, strolls distractedly
around the room, humming to himself and fingering his jabot,
then stops behind one of the young National Guards to peer at
his drawing and grunts approvingly.
LOUISE MICHEL appears in the open doorway. She is 40, not
pretty but intense-looking. She is wearing a blue tunic and broad-billed
kepi identical to the National Guards. Except for her longer
hair and the patched gray skirt that extends almost to the ankle
of her boots, she might be taken for a slender man. A long rifle-a
chassepot-with fixed bayonet is slung by its strap over her shoulder.
MICHEL
Salut, comrades!
The three Guards smile, the younger ones shyly, Osmane broadly.
Henriette cocks her head and frowns and shifts position, yanking
up her chemise to cover her breast. Courbet looks startled
MICHEL (CONT.)
Bonjour, mes amis!
2 YOUNGER GUARDS
(Amiably)
Bonjour.
OSMANE
Bonjour, Citoyenne! And welcome.
MICHEL
Ah, Osmane! You here? Are you going to become an artist now?
OSMANE
(grinning)
Never too old to learn, Citoyenne. The Revolution has liberated
my soul!
COURBET
Madame? You are?
OSMANE
(to Courbet, and emphasizing first word)
Citoyenne, my cher maître! This is the citoyenne Louise
Michel!
Courbet looks puzzled.
2 YOUNGER GUARDS
The Red Virgin, maître! Louise Michel, the Red Virgin.
Who faced the Prussians in December, and who rallied the Guard
against the Bretons in January!
COURBET
Ah! Citoyenne Michel! Of course. Enchanté! You have
come for a portrait?
MICHEL
Monsieur?
COURBET
I am not working with oils just now. Not for the duration
of the war, I have decided. Somber charcoal and pen-and-ink for
these days of struggle, until the final victory! But perhaps
we could make a sketch.
(as though suddenly getting an idea)
Wait! With Marianne, the Spirit of Liberty. The Spirit of Liberty
and the Spirit of the Commune, together! Come!
(excitedly)
Henriette! Resume your pose, only make way for the citoyenne!
He steps quickly over to Michel and seizes her by an elbow,
attempting to guide her to the platform. Michel hesitates and
looks at him, uncomprehending.
COURBET (CONT.)
Now if we just slip off this chassepot
(grabs the rifle and tries to ease it off Michel's shoulder)
so you can be holding it in your hands
MICHEL
(resisting, half startled, half menacing)
Monsieur! Let go, I beg you. I did not come here to pose. I am
here on business, for the Commune!
COURBET
(loudly)
Vive la Commune!
ALL 3 GUARDS
(laughing)
Vive la Commune!
Henriette belches, then covers her mouth and giggles. The
two younger Guards giggle too, and look away.
Cannon boom in the distance. Voices outside shout insults - "Ta
mère, Versaillais!" etc.
A small brass band plays, faintly at first, a light-hearted
music-hall song. The music and tramping feet grow louder, and
then fade. Henriette sings, softly then louder and then softly
again as the band passes. Her playful lyrics make the younger
Guards laugh. Osmane tries to frown disapprovingly, but he also
has to laugh. Neither Courbet nor Michel pays any attention to
Henriette , but each is studying the other.
MICHEL
Monsier Courbet. Maître.
COURBET
No!
(laughing)
Neither monsieur nor maître. Simply citoyen! A simple son
of France, citoyen like you!
MICHEL
(unsmiling)
Citoyen Courbet, you are a member of the Culture Commission of
the Commune.
COURBET
Why, yes. Why, yes, so I am! Indeed, I have been elected!
(laughing to himself)
And what are they saying now? Hah! Those fine gentlemen of the
Academy, with their pince-nez and their sneers. They scorned
my "Stonebreakers," they ridiculed my "Funeral
at Ornans." And now, now it is I, Citoyen Gustave Courbet,
who rules culture in Paris!
Courbet begins walking agitatedly, swinging his arms. Henriette,
without leaving her platform, mimics his stride and his gestures
broadly. The two YOUNG GUARDS stifle their laughter. Osmane pretends
not to notice her. MICHEL does notice and smiles slightly before
turning back to Courbet, who is completely absorbed in his own
discourse.
COURBET
And now, my next work,
(laughs in a crescendo from titter to bellow)
my next work will be a subtraction! A negative sculpture!
(turning suddenly toward Michel)
And to you, citoyenne, I shall confide the secret!
MICHEL
The Vendome Column?
COURBET
But, you know! How?
Henriette, still on her platform, rolls her eyes heavenward
and throws her arms back in a gesture of exasperation. The three
GUARDS stare at Courbet and frown.
MICHEL
Monsieur, citoyen, all Paris knows. You have been talking
about it for months, the destruction of the Vendome column.
The GUARDS all nod.
COURBET
(to Michel)
Talking, yes. But now we are going to do it! An engineer has
come up with a plan, they are going to saw through its base,
like a tree!
MICHEL
Yes, citoyen. Perhaps they can take all the bronze that's
on it and melt it back into cannons. That's what we need now.
But I have come for something else.
Henriette, obviously bored at being ignored, steps down from
the platform and squirms onto the lap of Osmane, who is at first
startled and then smiles with evident pleasure. But instead of
cuddling, Henriette adopts a new pose, something like "Nymph
on National Guard's Knee," with one arm raised and stretched
behind her and her face turned and keeping her eyes on Courbet.
MICHEL (CONT.)
As an elected member of the Commune, and as the leader of
its Culture Commission, you have the education of our youth as
one of your greatest responsibilities.
COURBET
Eh? Schools you mean? You want me to set up schools, in the
middle of a revolution?
MICHEL
Why not? It is certainly more useful than toppling a column
that does no harm to anyone. And how much is that costing the
Commune? The engineer's salary alone, then the workers and the
machinery that you are assembling. All I ask is a few thousand
francs, to open an institute and pay the salaries of two teachers
to teach these children
She looks toward the 2 young Guards.
MICHEL (CONT.)
and all the other children, boys and girls who've been building
barricades and some, like these, carrying weapons, ready to die
for ourfreedom. To teach them to read, to know history, to know
numbers so they can make the new society!
COURBET
Huh! You think you're going to teach these scamps their lessons?
Courbet gestures and looks back toward the Guards. For the
first time he notices Henriette stretched langorously across
Osmane's lap, holding on by one hand at the back of Osmane's
neck. Courbet gapes at the scene.
COURBET (CONT.)
Henriette!
Henriette looks up startled and nearly falls as she releases
her grip on Osman's neck. Courbet stares at her furiously, his
hands at his hips, his feet wide apart.
MICHEL
(suddenly shy)
You see, maître, I myself was once a school teacher. And
I am a poet. I know what fancies are in a child's mind, and what
frustration it is not to be able to say or write them.
COURBET
(snapping from his distraction by Henriette to look again
at Michel)
A poet? A fellow artiste, then! The Red Virgin a school teacher.
And a poet! My! What a strange world Paris has become!
He studies her with greater interest.
MICHEL
A few thousand francs, monsieur. For the children. A fraction
of what you have assigned to destroy the Vendome Column. The
Mayor of Montmartre, Monsieur Clémenceau, has promised
us a building, we want to open another in Belleville
COURBET
I have it! I see now that I was all wrong, it is not "The
Spirit of Liberty and the Spirit of the Commune." The Spirit
of the Commune is Liberty, and much more. Yes, the children.
It is the spirit of youth.
(louder, his face half-turned toward the Guards)
Gaspar! Charlot! Put down those sketch pads and pick up your
rifles! Up on the dais with you! Osmane, you stay back. And Henriette,
no, there's no place for you in this.
The two young GUARDS scramble to obey, as though at a military
command.
Courbet turns to Michel and bows, then takes her gently by
the elbow.
COURBET
And now, my dear school mistress, to your children!
Michel allows herself to be guided up to the dais, where Courbet
thoughtfully arranges her and the two young Guards so that they
are kneeling at her feet and looking up at her.
COURBET
A book. The school mistress needs an open book.
(shouting)
Henriette! Bring me ,,,
HENRIETTE
(stomping her foot)
Non!
She breaks away from Osmane, grabs a cloak, and rushes to
and then through the open door.
COURBET
Henriette!
He hastens after her. Osmane steps to the doorway and looks
downward, after them. He turns to Michel and his two comrades,
still posed on the dais. He shrugs and grins at them, they grin
back. He cocks his head and raises a finger to them to hold still,
and picks up a sketchbook.. MICHEL slides the rifle off her shoulder
and places it carefully across the platform, then stands erect,
smiles down at the young Guards, and tenderly places a hand on
the shoulder of each. Osmane begins to sketch.
FADE OUT
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